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| yes my chapter is coming my chapter is coming *jumps around like a 5 year old on Christmas*  
Supercel this is a really good fan-fic by the way
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| Chapter 25
Krew and his crew were walking... Sorry Running thru Overworld territory followed by an ARMY of guards
A hand stuck out from no where and took Mmax in to a little off-road without any appearing noise
LMAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaooooooo
The crew and the guards didnt even notice she was missing
10 hours later... Najarin's castle
*Takes big breaths* We... Lost them!, sayed PrinceZuko
*Takes big breathes aswell* A... Awsome... But... Are we there yet???, whined Krew
NO WE ARENT!, yelled Sam
Yo yo! Dont loose your cool dude!, sayed rooster
-Like If I would take orders from a chicken
- IM NOT A CHICKEN!
-Yeah, Well... We will go back on that later...
- OH YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Guys! stop fighting!, sayed Fireking
Ok... mumbled Rooster
Hey guys! Have you notice we dont here anymore laughing since a few hours?, sayed Kingtalk
Uhhh... Was that the fight ringing in my ears making me ears sore?, Said Zuko
-Ugggh... Anyways...
-GUYS! LOOK! MMAX ISNT HERE!!!!!!!
-OMG! PARTY TIME!!!!!!!!!!, Sayed CodemasterR
-Wait! This isnt good! We cant go to see the codemaster's missing Mmax!!!!!!, sayed Kingtalk
-Uhhh... Guys?, he continued
They were all Celebrating Mmax's disapearence... Well Except Krew an Kingtalk
Ahhh... too bad Stiki isnt here... Sayed CodemasterR
THIS ISNT FUNNY! MA GIRL IS GONE!, Sayed Krew
Dude... She isnt in to you... Sayed Kingtalk
-Whatever!
-Now... STOP CELEBRATING! We need to continue our journey without her..., sayed Kingtalk
Meanwhile...
Guys... We cant wait anymore... I cant establish contact with Super thru Her scanner and she hasnt ported back home..., sayed Blazer
Well we cant go without one of us... It would be like abbandonning someone in themiddle of a war all alone..., said Hunter
Dont worry... We will be going in a few days... Since I have a few "friends" who now all the players and they could get us a ride easy... So... Ill start by asking our spy how and where is Blargers... And Ill go get the results of every other spy... Now I have to get the results of every spy... Sayed Trasher
meanwhile in Overworld territory
-Hi! Im Jrod! And I saw you were running and followed by players and the guards... I thought you needed maybe a bit of help!, Jrod sayed in a low voice with a big nice smile
-Well uhmm... Eeehhh... uhhh... *Starts playing with hair* Im Mmax, She sayed while smiling back to Jrod
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| | WOW great chap though why running from OW guards? did Mmax trip and knock one of them over LOL Lucky for Mmax I'm tight with the overworlders |
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| | Lol because They are the OW's most WANTED |
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| | OW's most WANTED i hope i don't get in the list |
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| | Dude your a codemaster...Every creature has a special h a t e for them |
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| becuse of there good looks 
Edited: 11/3/2009 2:27:39 PM by cody10323 |
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| wow keeping this alive aren't you guys? can't wait til Mmax reads Lol She'll be LMAO all over the place probably! can't wait to see krew's reaction either he'll probably scream for the fun of it....... " I lost ma girl!" "waaaaa" maybe not the waa but some people are gonna be screaming WHAT??? I can just tell!
thats terrible how can they be wanted by overworlders though I guess it fits that my tribe dislikes the good guys as much as me except for Mmax I guess though.
also read it for a second time it's just that funny!
Edited: 11/3/2009 2:46:00 PM by jrod1196 |
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| Read the chapter right before for the oW and miedian thing
Too bad Blazer And Trasher quit... |
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| what Y they had such good parts was that like their last chapter or something?
oh and super just to tell you when rooster says yo yo you forgot to say cool before dude
Edited: 11/4/2009 6:15:20 AM by jrod1196 |
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