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Posted 11/4/2009 7:17:09 AM


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As the Heartless circled around Sam and his new friends they we're outnumbered until a giant shuriken sliced through 20 of them scaring the rest off "You ok?""Yeah who are you?""The name's Yuffie and you are?" then they answered "I'm Sam.""Mine's James.""And I'm Hikaru."afterwards Yuffie took Sam,James and Hikaru to a small house where 3 more people were inside "Yuffie where were you?"asked a tough guy with a large gun like sword "I was saving these guys from the Heartless Squall!""Hmmm.Wait are those Keyblades?"then Sam answered "Is that what this called."then a blonde man with a toothpick in his mouth answered in a texan accent "Last time we saw one of those it was used by a kid named Sora."then a knock on the door was heard "Whose their?"answered a girl in a pink dress "It's Merlin Aerith please let me in."then she opened the door and an old man in long blue shirt with a wizard hat entered "I heard their were 3 Keyblade bearers here is it true?"then he looked at Sam,James and Hikaru after a while Merlin explained the situation "So these Keyholes are returning and only we can close them.""Yes that's correct James.""But first y'all are gonna need a ship so take mine.""Thanks Cid."

Back in the castle Maleficent and the other villains were speaking about their plans "So they have a ship now."then a shadowed man answered "I shall take care of them even though I am in my human form.""Patience Sid my father told me the best way to lure out an enemy is to be patient.""Well thought of Shan Yu.""We'll send some Heartless to follow them and when the time is right we will attack them.Hahahahahahahahaha!"

After stocking up on supplies Sam,James and hikaru set off in Cid's ship to a world with a maze and a castle with a heart on it.
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Posted 11/6/2009 11:18:44 PM


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Sending them to hallow bastion right off the bat? Interesting

Edited: 11/6/2009 11:32:53 PM by Hilot09
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Posted 11/7/2009 4:24:14 AM


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I think u missed Kingdom Hearts2
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Posted 11/7/2009 10:58:11 AM


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doesnt matter, its still a good story.
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Posted 11/8/2009 6:49:19 AM


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this is after kingdom hearts 2 and yeah hollow bastion is the world and can any one give me some ideas for a few heartless
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Posted 11/9/2009 9:38:36 PM


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Hope the next chapter is soon
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Posted 11/10/2009 7:39:25 AM


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it's coming soon just can't decide between cloud and tifa or the gullwings to tell the heroes about what's happening plus i need to think of a way to introduce stitch into the story for the chapter after this
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Posted 11/22/2009 2:57:32 AM


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Landing in the world Sam,Hikaru and James walked around the streets then a shadowed figure appeared from the darkness."This world has been connected.Soon the Nobodies will arrive and devour your Hearts."then he disappeared "What was that about?""No idea Hikaru but it's strange."then a girl in a black sleaveless top with combat jeans walked up to the bearers "Hey I'm looking for a guy with spiky hair."then the boys pulled on their hair."(giggles)No spikier.""Sorry but we'll keep an eye out for you.""Hey come with me I'll take you up to the castle.""Thanks."Suddenly 13 white figures appeared with zip like mouths "What the...?Are they Heartless?""No worse their Nobodies!"yelled the girl.

In Maleficents castle Sin was enjoying seeing the heroes trying to beat the strange creatures then Maleficent entered "So Sin how is our progress on the treaty with Orignization XIII?""It is coming along smoothly Maleficent soon we can be able to create the most powerful fusion between Heartless and Nobody."

Back with the bearers Sam finally destroyed the last Nobody then the girl introduced herself "My name's Tifa." then the boys told her their name and explianed why their here in the first place then Tifa answered "So the Keyholes are coming back and you came to Hollow Bastion for the reason but Merlin told us that the Keyhole here can only be opened by the Princess' of Heart."Later at Merlin's House they found an old book with a note on it the note said "Dear Sam,James and Hikaru this book holds a world you can enter this world by following your heart.Merlin."then they opened the book and they were pulled in landing in a small meadow.
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Posted 11/22/2009 11:12:46 AM


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Excellent, but you might have used too much of the game dialogue
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Posted 12/1/2009 3:37:47 AM


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In the meadow leaves stayed in the air not moving and no wind blew through the trees "Let's head back and tell Merlin what's going on.""Yeah let's go guys."answered Sam later back at Hollow Bastion Leon was waiting for the boys and when they arrived he told them that the Heartless and Nobodies formed a treaty to join forces "Where did you get this information?"answered Hikaru an old friend of mine told me and i thought he was no more."then Merlin appeared "So how is the world inside that book?""It's frozen in time."said James"Oh dear then let me check the book."Merlin looked over the book and found the problem "The book has lost 5 pages that's why it's frozen in time."after a long discussion Sam,Hikaru and James went back to the Gummi Ship and headed off to a world that's just one big spaceship when they got near a small plasma burst hit the main engine and the ship got shot down leaving the boys unconcious.

Back in Maleficent's castle Maleficent was talking to a large 20ft tall figure "Listen Maleficent a ship has been shot down on my world now pay me like you promised!""Now now Gantu you'll get your money after you bring me those pesky kids Keyblades.""Oh blitsnak!"later in a cell on the ship the boys began to wake up "Ow where are we."then a voice in a deep german accent answered "You are in cell on police spacecraft oh my apologies I am Dr.Jumba Joogiba Evil Scientist and you are?""I'm Sam."I'm Hikaru.""I'm James.""So why are you in this cell?""I was arrested for creating illegal genetic experiments I created about 626 of them and my latest experiment 626 is in a different cell he may be of use to us."

Later in 626's cell Gantu walks in and walks up to 626 "So experiment 626 any last words?""Y..y...yes Gantu I do look up."Gantu looks up then 626 grabs him and throws him to the wall "Bye bye HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"
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